Friday, October 17, 2008

Response: Research proposal feedback

The review helped most because it identified places where elaborated points didn't follow the intended structure, and revealed places that need elaboration for clarity.

Also, I feel more comfortable about placing the Problem section earlier in my essay.

The questions about the logistics of the method were well posed, and will help as I revise this for my portfolio.

On a side note, the way the comments were laid out was perfect!

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